Monday, May 5, 2008

everyday I write
I’m learning how to let go
how to let my words be
and I thank them for setting me free
a cliché I know
but besides cantankerous
cliché is my favorite word
and to be creative
I have to give up my sense
of being wrong
some famous person has their name
after that quote
don’t know who he is
but I saw it in a note
probably waiting for a reply
well here is part one
part two will come next time
still pondering over wine
because a parents unlived life
must be damage to a child
that’s why I write
to remember my life
One day my mind may be jaded
Who knows when I’ll be gone
This is my favorite thing
How can I stop my creative growth?
Just because I’m afraid
Of what my “invisible audience” might say

3 comments:

Don said...

nice. i like. potent.

NoWay said...

From one sis to another,

I was going to respond but when I started reading everyone else’s comments I got drained and disappointed and then I read the comment you left on charactercorner and it was brilliant. Some people can not eat what they order but you served it up anyway.

Thank You!

Peace Queen

Foia said...

Thanks Don! And naw I don't know what I want on my page yet. I'm thinking though!

Noway- I take it you don't blog, because I checked you out...and nothing. I was sad. But that you for your comment. I am very blunt about what I feel. I stand for what I believe. And I always question authority..