Thursday, May 8, 2008

Poetry Noir




I’m changing up
showing the world
my face
I was hidden
like M.J’s kids
under a blanket
but now you can see
the flesh behind
these words
i’m introducing
myself now….

I like to be private
it seems that’s exactly
how I like it
people will now
be judging my face
Not just judging what I think
but here I shielded myself
from the bloggee’s
because I don’t think they respond
if you wear a mask
because they want to see
who exactly “you” are
but if you didn’t know
I’m one of the many….stars
you don’t have to look far
because I am dark
I call it poetry noir
Venetian blinds
go vertical
in the dark shadows
of your mind
you will find my words lurking
because they are strong
something like a shot of whiskey
I’ll get you drunk
I’m all you’ll need
so step into the darkness
and let me help you see

4 comments:

Don said...

you will find my words lurking
because they are strong
something like a shot of whiskey
I’ll get you drunk


this is true.

i've never seen anyone who looks quite like you. mysteriously stunning.

Foia said...

Don- i get you tipsy? lol

And thank you..I am not really gothic.. just incase you were wondering.

Don said...

my email: donchristop@hotmail.com


you CANNOT leave. i admire the style wayy too much.

Don said...

i don't think you are gothic. actually i haven't judged you. i notice your hellified pen. i notice your extreme physical beauty.

i'm from the old earth. i live and let live. unless i am harmed.

...great way to be.