Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Poem of the day..Just me typing away. Not recorded in my books. Me not giving my words a second look..

I think I scare people away
From my blog
Because I’m too intense
I write what is real
It’s like an orgasm
It’s a release
Something too sticky
That I leave all over
This page
Like it or not
I’ma continue to say…
What I feel I must
My writing is like
The thrust
Of my body
Against these keys

Faced with the future
Like it or not
Have to do what you gotta do
Just to survive
Not putting myself at risk
To slip off a mountain
Called life’s cliff
Because I’m tiptoeing
Around what I know
Realizing that I must
But somewhat afraid to grow

I’m opening myself up
A new chapter on life
Words that are not recorded
On white paper with lines
I strike the keys
Like he strikes me
In a different way
I have much to say
And I will keep going
Forever
Until I have no more days
Then my words will be
Light to my family
Like spring or summer
Sun rays

So this is my poem for the day
I write to feel a void
that invades myspace
so until tomorrow
this is goodbye
and if I never come back
know that I’m peaceful
and that everything’s okay

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like this.

I say what I feel too.

Good stuff.

Don said...

foia, you are raw and intense which make for great blog reads around. i feel your spirit. the thing with me is, i have a blog read routine.

but i will change the script.

Don said...

babygirl, it will also help if you replied to your comments and developed that much-needed interaction.

just my two cents.

Foia said...

Thanks @ Jewells...Welcome to my page, Don says I need to comment back.So I guess I'll start today. You are really awesome too. You crack me up..

@ Don- I thought I always commented back to you. I guess not. And I didn't mean to offend you, about reading my blog or what ever you though. Because I sensed a little bit of angst in your words.. Question for you..How did you find my blog..Hitting next blog or what?

Foia said...

@ Don..my bad sweetie...I didn't see that you were going to change the scrip. I guess adding me to it..Thanks ...

Where do I go to learn how to make my page all jazzy?

Don said...

there was no angst. of course i wasn't offended. lol. it wasn't meant towards me. i was saying that most bloggers develop familiarity aamongst each other thru replies to their comments left on your own blog.

not me. i will read what i consider to be good reads, regardless of comments.

what are you wanting to do on your page? i will be glad to help.

Don said...

my bad, i found your blog looking under favorite music tupac.

Foia said...

That is just so weird that you found me under Tupac, and you are my kids fathers blogger friend. Hell ya'll probably know each other.Where you from Neway? I enjoy your post, and I enjoy you stopping by. You were the first one to say anything. I appreciate you.

I want some music, and I want my title to be funky..I want to be able to add people's blog to my blog..of course you... I should let you do it..Wanna?

Foia said...

Jewells..I'ma call you sniffles because you are aways sniffing something..lol